The Gardens of Landler Abbey by Megan Arkenberg (an American woman)

from Beneath Ceaseless Skies, issue 83 (Dec 2011)

This is a novelette about war crimes and the industrialization of warfare, set in a pseudo-English fantasy milieu. The topic is very important – I think – and not as frequently seen in fantasy as in science fiction, but here I felt there was a mismatch between the ambience and the content.

The burgeoning 19th-century style and the depictions of rich socialites really distracted from the plot. It is possible to write about fake-European fantasy nobility and serious issues of warfare at the same time – Lois McMaster Bujold’s space-opera Vorkosigan saga is the proof. But it’s a delicate affair, and this particular novelette didn’t hit that sweet spot of balance, for me at least. (I wonder if the Vorkosigan saga served as direct inspiration, seeing that the author runs a webzine named after one of the Vorkosigan novels, Mirror Dance; or is that a coincidence?)

The pacing also seemed off – I found myself skimming the long, meandering descriptions (and had to force myself not to do that), then when the protagonist had a conversation with the owner of the gardens, the story sped up, only to slow down again. The ending was abrupt at best, and the horror elements seemed tacked on and introduced all too late.

Arkenberg is a prolific and adventurous writer, so maybe I should try something else by her…? Readers interested in the topic of war crimes in speculative fiction should try Ken Liu’s The Man Who Ended History: A Documentary instead.